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This map I think isn't quite good enough to release but it was a good attempt. I will decline this map but I want to give you a few examples of the issues i have with the map:
Skipping the first part with weapons seems to be better than doing the first part given how awkward it is. Red box: Its annoying to start the map to be instantly dropped in freeze. You also have shields there that can be avoided. More annoying than fun imo. Green box: Awkward starting part, isn't good for team 0 runs as there will be blocking. Light Blue Box: Rather faily drop for a novice map, you should place more unfreeze so you aren't in freeze on corners.
Rocket fly might be a bit too much for novice players even though its short.
This part is possible with 2 tees but I don't think that novice players will do it correctly, given that it seems to either require both tees getting grenade or back tracking. The solo unsaveable freeze section is too faily for novice, the top hammer hit section is also too faily imo.
Rather awkward part at the one block gap, maybe place a block to line up against to jump up. Although I think removing the messy tiles there would be best.
A bit faily for novice
Not enough space between teleports for novice imo
Was this supposed to be a grenade shot part? The top edge is failable which isn't that good for novice, maybe remove freeze on corner
shotgun solo is more moderate difficulty and rather awkward to do.
jetpack is cheatable here
Who should get shotgun in this next section? Why doesn't the player who has shotgun just go to the top? I also don't understand why shotgun is needed? I found the easiest way to do the part was without it
A bit too dull imo, with the length its also a bit too faily. Add platforms for players to land on and save each other.
Here you have hidden a way to get all weapons before starting the map, I don't think that's ok for non entities players. Its ok to hide secrets but I don't think you should hide shortcuts like this.
I encourage you to keep trying though, your second map will be an improvement I'm sure 🙂
$decline
only one needs a rocket, they both go up and the rocket guy goes back
need shotgun to get speed
but whatever now its declined anyways
and shields at the start are supposed to be avoidable
if i look this
and this
huge difference in map structure
First screen it llook like big boy in small room. Very little empty space, small aisles, tight, narrow. On second sreen all look good. no need more space and it is ok. keep it.