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The idea of a map is good, but poorly executed. There is a lot of entity spam which is not good. Here is a suggestion for one of your parts.

You could put the tele entities like this to prevent entity spam.

More entity spam

Here is a skip which was obvious at finish

More entity spam

The map doesn't really bring any challenge and is too short. Actual testers will tell you more, but I recommend checking this page for next time https://ddnet.org/rules/ and also examine other players released maps to get a better idea how to place everything so it feels nice and is good as gameplay

does this mean the map can be declined?

Yes, It doesn't meet the requirements of a good map unfortunately.

But now you know what the errors are and you can prevent them on your next map submit!

Wait for a tester and he will tell you more detailed info.

Because I don't want to rush and be wrong.

Okay, thanks for testing 🙂

parts can be skiped

я конечно думал, что тут могут быть скипы, но не настолько

You forgot the cheat from 6 to 7

Without doing the part

I had a quick glance at the map. Didn't examine it deeper.

looks like you want to make a puzzle map, the map started well but quickly deteriorated, all the cheats don't make it better

xd

• added time cps
• fixed all skips
• deleted all entity spam

what does it mean?

the map is very interesting idea . map to short ! totele 2 interesting idea , totele 4 intesting idea , totele 9 interesting idea . But need to improve them ! Experement with parts , to create new parts , very briliant idea and you just made sketch , this map could be insanely cool .

Ill even try making 2 parts just to see what i can create .

just recreated your part for now . i like this better you can see what you need to do .

I would experiment but I don't even know how I can change some parts of the map, also I don't know what to put in the new parts

just add somethink then improvise shooting somewhere and after creating part . try creating somethink and play it or play it in not intendet way .

ok i'll try something

i don't know actually

this part looks better than my map

it's your part i just played around ... i think freeze parts could be there better made . because it's seems easy . I have now idea how you could make rocket part easyer , make explosion strength higher . ( so you could make last jump easy with out double ) . But need to play it again and retest .

ill send you my version if you whant see configuration

Если я правильно понял то вы оба знаете русский )

да

почему тестеры игнорят эту мапу?

Чекни сколько мап сейчас в тесте + челы работают за бесплатно)

та я вижу

за деньги договорись

5$ +- может протестят

сделай так чтоб можно было хукать с любого угла

бесячая фигня обязательно нужно целиться вправо

ещё остался небольшой скип

не совсем понял прикол "небольшого Скипа"

ну обычно стреляют просто в стену потом вниз

и потом только уже в тп

а, я понял

завтра исправлю

• tele-hook 8 added the ability to hook from all sides (not only on the right, marked red lines)
• to-tele 4 part skip fixed and modified

u can do much more creative parts with telegun (play the map taser for example)

its too short and not interesting

$decline