#NightMoon
"NightMoon" by EpicGamerYoubug [Brutal]
DDNet 09/20/2021 10:56 AM
@EpicGamerYoubug

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Starkiller 09/20/2021 11:35 AM

spaming this tune zone everywhere seems pretty useless. just put it at the corners

Starkiller 09/20/2021 11:35 AM

cheat

Starkiller 09/20/2021 11:36 AM

way too faily copmared to rest of map many ppl will fail after the end of kinta cuz they touch randomly freeze. make it less faily

Starkiller 09/20/2021 11:38 AM

why should i put one deep here? can just do both tees in the left part for undeep. makes it less faily and probably faster

Starkiller 09/20/2021 11:45 AM

dont like this map tbh. 80% drag parts and its always one team part followed by part which the single tee has to do 2 times to get both tees through. not rlly fun at all. in 3 tee maps u should make rlly less basic drag parts and make other stuff which is more fun and playable as a 3 tee team and at all the parts (solo drag and team drag parts) arent rlly creative. most of them are rlly rlly basic. dont think this map is worth a rls. try to make less drag parts in a 3 tee map. take a look at some brutal/moderate 3 tee maps like best of three to get a feeling how modern 3 tee maps should look. but thats just my opinion

CL - Agente Pinguim 09/20/2021 3:40 PM

dont think so since u can hammer thru 1 tile down

Starkiller 09/20/2021 3:45 PM

so he can put 2x2 tune around every edge

CL - Agente Pinguim 09/20/2021 4:04 PM

what? XD

CL - Agente Pinguim 09/20/2021 4:05 PM

but i said u can hammer one tile down thru the ground

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 4:54 PM

i did fixed two parts and some visual bugs,I removed the excess of tunes and put them in the corners and the cheat on through,thanks for the feedback Star :)

CL - Agente Pinguim 09/20/2021 4:59 PM

nice

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:23 PM

caraio nem me cahmo pra faze o mapa tbm kkkk

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:25 PM

oxi kkk

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:25 PM

faze oque

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:25 PM

mas o mapa ta bem bonitin

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:25 PM

se que fez o design?

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:25 PM

ss

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:26 PM

a lua n foi eu q fiz foi a diamond

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

vo chama ela pra fazer umas coisas pra mim

@EpicGamerYoubug

, se viu meu mapa la no shorts?

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

galaxia

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

ainda n

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

kkk dps veja la deu trabaio pra faze o bg pricipalmente

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

blz

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 6:27 PM

now say goodbyeee

EpicGamerYoubug 09/20/2021 6:28 PM

goodboia

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:23 PM

corners

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:24 PM
Arrow 09/20/2021 8:24 PM
Arrow 09/20/2021 8:25 PM
Arrow 09/20/2021 8:26 PM

there aren't corners in the whole part

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:26 PM

delete freeze in stoppers

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:27 PM

don't spam entities off sign this goes for every part that has it

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:28 PM

barely visible, u should change the colours

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:29 PM

this type of signs shouldn't be in front of the tee

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:29 PM

just 1 sing its enough

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:31 PM

i dont think its a problem but this are time cp's not just numbers

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 8:32 PM

xD

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:32 PM

again

JoaoGarda 09/20/2021 8:32 PM

so much entities off sign

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:33 PM

if u are going to put a bg on the stoppers better do it for every stopper

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:35 PM

unfreeze not marked, and the jump refill its useless

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:40 PM

cut this

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:44 PM

The map has a lot of weight which it can be reduced a lot Red: use just 1, or delete with Photoshop the things that aren't useful Orange: same here just 1 Green: this star was made by Ravie so ask him if u can use it

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:47 PM

put every unfreeze in the cto/to tele

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:49 PM

corners has to be on the back of the tee

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:50 PM
Arrow 09/20/2021 8:54 PM

1.- those places to hook aren't useful 2.- you can use edge to skip the part

Arrow 09/20/2021 8:59 PM

1.- you can make an edge hook in the beginning avoiding the main idea 2.-edge isnt necessary here you can skip things bcs the parts are too small to force a way

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:03 PM

put a back sing

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:07 PM

here you can just swing dummy and you can get to the other part so idk if the stopper is here for help or avoid smth

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:10 PM

move shields 3 tiles up

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:15 PM

you could do this better

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:15 PM

same for the rocket part

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:16 PM

ik that its marked in entities below this part which way should take every individual, but to be more clearly mark the rocket path

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:19 PM

do parts which you can back fast if u fail a hook or whatever

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:22 PM

move the solo to there yellow: unnecessary better delete it

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:23 PM

put the TO teles on the ground

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:32 PM

it is supposed to let u keep the guns for the rest of the map?

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:34 PM

just put tune zones where its needed not in every part

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:34 PM
Arrow 09/20/2021 9:35 PM

there isnt sun in this unfreeze

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:36 PM

delete those stars looks quite bad

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:38 PM

1.- same here 2.- aren't corners there 3.- put a bg to the switches that are like this

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:42 PM

unfreeze here pls

Arrow 09/20/2021 9:46 PM

make the colour brighter

EpicGamerYoubug 09/21/2021 4:42 PM

fixed everything arrow said, i think 😄 👌

EpicGamerYoubug 09/21/2021 4:48 PM

no, i just forgot the shields

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:07 PM

u didint put a bg behind the stoppers like u did in other palces ¿why not?

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:07 PM

corner

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:13 PM

here you should put a warning sign (!)

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:15 PM

move the entities sings off to there, this sings shouldn't be specifically on the text

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:32 PM

you should put this in some other place imagine fall in there bcs lag and u dont have the gun

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:36 PM

move this 3 tiles up, and put a speeder on the right corner or a tele idk

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:41 PM

maybe extend this 3 tiles to let the part be shareable

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:43 PM

put a warning sign (!) here to

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:49 PM

moon should be hd to

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:55 PM

in these places when its just 1 player doing the part, put just 1 to/cto tele on the ground just like in solos (check whole map)

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:57 PM

maybe add a tele there, bcs you can just edge in there without using the jetpack

Arrow 09/22/2021 8:59 PM

i meant something like this

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:00 PM

same for when there are 2 or just 1

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:02 PM

grass design bug

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:05 PM

corner

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:12 PM

delete tunezone

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:12 PM

again, check every tune zone and delete the ones that are unnecessary

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:18 PM

maybe put a tele there? if u do it you can positionate yourself better to the other spot (where the stopper is) due is a tight part and the dummy doesn't get still on the corner

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:21 PM

yellow: maybe move this 1 tile due if u do a quick edge hook you hit the unhook, and you aren't be able to get the hook red: you can close that its useless

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:25 PM

prevent this stupid death bcs of lag and move the unhook like 3 tiles. you can delete 2 of those toteles and move it to the floor, due its just a 3 player map

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:28 PM

same here (totele on the ground), not need to spam the on switch with 1 its enough, and if u dont want at least move it it to where the solo is

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:31 PM

delete the switch on there

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:32 PM

mark this no hook

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:36 PM

idk if this type of teles should be in different color due represent different aspect

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:37 PM
Arrow 09/22/2021 9:39 PM

corners

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:50 PM

what about put a tele (red rectangles) to force the way that you want?

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:52 PM

corner

Arrow 09/22/2021 9:55 PM
EpicGamerYoubug 09/23/2021 1:55 AM

fixed some stuff

Arrow 09/23/2021 2:21 AM

srry i forgot to say this, but you have different sings for the off switch

Arrow 09/23/2021 2:22 AM

and should be the same (the left sing should okay for both)

texnonik 09/23/2021 10:16 AM

well this map not forces you to use 3players , realy basic parts , after some parts , parts become very easy

texnonik 09/23/2021 10:16 AM

you need to drag twice two persons same ..... boring to repeat same stuff ...

texnonik 09/23/2021 10:17 AM

you could make 2player map instead but still need to fix a lot stuff then ...

texnonik 09/23/2021 10:17 AM

i would decline it .... sry

texnonik 09/23/2021 10:19 AM

you could make somethink when you drag one player he needs to drag other guy instead (not one tee need to drag both of them ) . ... but still need to make it interesting so 3 players are playing at same time ....

EpicGamerYoubug 10/03/2021 3:02 PM

I'm thinking what can I do in the parts, so it doesn't get like this, as soon as I finish I'll send the map here ^^

texnonik 10/03/2021 3:48 PM

Its easyet to create new map ( i think like that ) its hard to create good map like this

joeyAZ3BR 10/13/2021 1:55 AM

Hi :p do an part with shotgun fly xd, or rocket + shotgun

Ravie 10/13/2021 1:38 PM

The 3p mechanic is really not used well, most of the time you just have to play the same drags twice. About the drags themselves, they're rather basic but use way too many edgehooks, which is just not fun to play. Design is really decent for a newcomer. You should try making a new map where majority of the parts actually use 3p teamwork or a regular 2p map with better drags but this one I don't think is worth reworking.

Ravie 10/13/2021 1:39 PM

$decline

texnonik 10/13/2021 4:15 PM
CL - Agente Pinguim 10/13/2021 10:20 PM

F

EpicGamerYoubug 10/15/2021 12:23 AM

oh, declined again, next time i'll try my best :')