#Lunar_Stage
"Lunar Stage" by DogCaramelo [Novice]
DDNet 12/23/2023 6:21 AM
@z_eighty

this is your map's testing channel! Post map updates here and remember to follow our mapper rules: https://ddnet.org/rules

DDNet 12/23/2023 6:21 AM
warlytoz 12/23/2023 11:40 AM
texnonik 12/23/2023 11:58 AM

all map can be done solo (it seems like ) . there is nothing interesting at this super minimalistic straight line parts .

z_eighty 12/23/2023 1:03 PM
texnonik 12/23/2023 1:18 PM

very boring solo map with jetpack

z_eighty 12/23/2023 1:19 PM

xd

z_eighty 12/23/2023 1:20 PM

So that would be a "rejected?"

texnonik 12/23/2023 1:22 PM

i think yes . suggestion to look new released solo maps if you want to create solo map . or recent released novice maps if you want to create novice map .

z_eighty 12/23/2023 1:23 PM

ok, I already knew it would be rejected because it was small and inspired by linear but ok, thanks for understanding xd

sqart. 12/23/2023 2:08 PM

solo map

sqart. 12/23/2023 2:09 PM

Add more complexity to the solo map

sqart. 12/23/2023 2:10 PM

And a few parts to make it realistic to play)

sqart. 12/23/2023 2:11 PM

And the map will be very good. But there is still a need to work on the design.

z_eighty 12/23/2023 2:46 PM

ok

z_eighty 12/23/2023 5:18 PM
DDNet 12/23/2023 5:18 PM
z_eighty 12/23/2023 5:19 PM

๐Ÿ˜ญ

z_eighty 12/23/2023 5:21 PM
z_eighty 12/23/2023 5:48 PM

.

DDNet 12/23/2023 6:27 PM

Map filename must match channel name.

z_eighty 12/23/2023 6:30 PM

update .-.

DDNet 12/23/2023 6:30 PM

Map filename must match channel name.

z_eighty 12/23/2023 6:30 PM

lunar_stage? ;-

z_eighty 12/23/2023 6:47 PM

Can someone help me? because later today, the 24th and 25th, I won't be able to go online

z_eighty 12/23/2023 8:04 PM

bruuh...

texnonik 12/23/2023 9:56 PM

Lunar_Stage.map

texnonik 12/23/2023 9:59 PM

also it's now moderate not novice . map parts are unbalanced . there are few parts . look recent moderate maps to get idea how map should be done . if you want to make moderate map .

z_eighty 12/24/2023 3:38 AM

map but it was supposed to be solo

z_eighty 12/24/2023 3:49 AM

.

sqart. 12/24/2023 3:29 PM

He has a solo map. It fits perfectly into this category, but not as well as for novice and moderate.

sqart. 12/24/2023 3:30 PM
z_eighty 12/24/2023 5:28 PM

Is there something I need to change?

sqart. 12/24/2023 5:57 PM

That's how cool map is. I advised you to look at the options for a solo map like yours. There you can look further and change or add to your own version. Throw small particles on the map by type like trees, grasses, lamps and more. Add a little bit of parts and traps))

z_eighty 12/24/2023 5:59 PM

So now I need to detail the map?

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:00 PM

Yes. Add things at your discretion. But the main thing is not to overdo it

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:01 PM

I would recommend adding something to the background. By the type of clouds, sun, stars, fog and something like that. At least two objects

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:07 PM

Black: I would advise you to change the spawn of the players, that is, the title of the 'Game' section Red: Here I would recommend adding the Logo of the map and the logo of the creator of this map.

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:11 PM

I would advise you to fix such gaps in the freeze.

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:13 PM

In general, I looked at it is not necessary to add many parts. Just refine these details and you will get an awesome map

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:14 PM

If you want, I'll help you with the map.

sqart. 12/24/2023 6:20 PM

I advised RGBA to change the value of A: 171

z_eighty 12/25/2023 12:10 AM

Ok Thx

z_eighty 12/25/2023 12:56 AM

I did everything in a hurry When I get home I'll tidy up

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:14 AM

I'm new to this whole map making thing, how do I add things to squads?

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:21 AM

ok,I learned

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:44 AM

I didn't understand? I understood that I should move places, so I didn't understand where

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:49 AM

ok ok, I'll do most of it, but if you can do things that I didn't understand or improve, I'd appreciate it, because this is my first map that I'm seriously trying to do.

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:51 AM

Some part I did on purpose

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:53 AM
DDNet 12/25/2023 4:53 AM

Map filename must match channel name.

sqart. 12/25/2023 2:30 PM
@z_eighty

I can throw off a full sketch of the map.

coke1465 12/25/2023 2:31 PM

what u doing here, maybe move it do dm's and make a map together

sqart. 12/25/2023 2:51 PM

Let's

sqart. 12/25/2023 2:59 PM

If I help you. Then they will count that they made the map together and there will be two authors on it...

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:00 PM

If you're ready, then I don't mind.

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:36 PM

Ok

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:36 PM

Thx

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:39 PM

oh, sad xd

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:39 PM

No, thx

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:39 PM

he's kind of the only one answering me xdd

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:44 PM

I'm just not a tester. I can't help you ๐Ÿ™‚

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:44 PM

In their opinion...

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:45 PM

Xd

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:46 PM

Was that an opinion?

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:46 PM

Everyone

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:47 PM

You see, I don't respect testers here and I'm also toxic

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:47 PM

That's what they said

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:47 PM
coke1465 12/25/2023 3:49 PM

A3. Helping Everyone can help, but if you want to help, respect the testing process: gameplay then design.

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:50 PM

oh OK sorry

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:51 PM

Besides, who said that I want to make a map for him. I wanted to give him the idea of creating a map. Taking an example for his project.

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:52 PM

๐Ÿ˜‰

coke1465 12/25/2023 3:52 PM

i said u both could start a map together, looks like u both are new mappers

coke1465 12/25/2023 3:52 PM

๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:52 PM

ok let me see if I understand Everyone can help, but only the testers can decide whether the map will be accepted or not?

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:53 PM

I came up with an idea. Are we really new builders?

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:54 PM

I haven't done it yet. And it is completely attached xD

z_eighty 12/25/2023 3:56 PM

That? is it yes or no

coke1465 12/25/2023 3:56 PM

it is clear when I look at the map and what is written here

coke1465 12/25/2023 3:57 PM

maybe u both should take a look into

#๐Ÿ“Œinfo
sqart. 12/25/2023 3:57 PM

Haha, I've looked at it 100 or 200 times

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:57 PM
sqart. 12/25/2023 3:58 PM

Your opinion and reasoning of our dialogue is changing every minute.

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:58 PM

You read one thing and immediately say another

sqart. 12/25/2023 3:58 PM

xDD

coke1465 12/25/2023 3:59 PM

I don't know exactly what you're trying to tell me

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:00 PM

What I'm trying to convey to you is that you read one thing and immediately talk about another topic.

coke1465 12/25/2023 4:02 PM

what u mean by another topic

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:02 PM

Well, it happens. So let's skip it.

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:02 PM

Guys, could you stop fighting or what are you doing and talk about my map?

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:03 PM

I was talking about another speech with this man in general:

@z_eighty

You probably read it and thought about something completely different and started talking about your conclusions, but our essence of the dialogue was not based on what you wrote at all.

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:03 PM

We don't get along with

@coke1465

just chatting

)

coke1465 12/25/2023 4:04 PM

i have seen that people are helping each other here. but none of this helps to make this map releasable, that's why i suggested that you do something together and gain more experience

coke1465 12/25/2023 4:06 PM

"Testing is not just playing a map! It takes more than just 20 minutes and it is hard work. We as a tester are not just a machine to check if parts work and map is free of bugs. We do not take every map. Take a critical look at the map. Does this map bring something worth releasing to DDNet?

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:09 PM

That's what I was talking about. I wanted to offer you an idea so that you can

@z_eighty

we set up to develop this map together, so I will help him.

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:09 PM

with map

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:11 PM

I thought he was a tester too I think the tester can have access to the chat because don't let me open the tester to enter the chats and guide, now maybe everything I did is useless

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:12 PM

I have a bunch of them

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:13 PM

Bruh...From novice he went solo, wasn't it easier to stay solo?

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:13 PM

?

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:14 PM

It's kind of a solo

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:15 PM

He offered it to me

@coke1465

to help you

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:15 PM

With the creation of the map. Since there will be 2 creators. And you can gain experience, etc.

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:19 PM

I would appreciate it, but I prefer to do it alone, since it's my first

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:20 PM

Okay, whatever you say. My job was to propose.

sqart. 12/25/2023 4:20 PM

)

z_eighty 12/25/2023 4:22 PM

Google

z_eighty 12/26/2023 2:52 AM

Could some test evaluate and tell what is wrong?

DDNet 12/26/2023 2:52 AM

Map filename must match channel name.

texnonik 12/26/2023 4:54 AM

Change name to Lunar_Stage.map

z_eighty 12/26/2023 4:54 AM
DDNet 12/26/2023 4:54 AM

Map filename must match channel name.

texnonik 12/26/2023 9:11 AM

L and S bigger letters ....

z_eighty 12/26/2023 3:50 PM
z_eighty 12/26/2023 3:50 PM

aaaaah, thx

catseyenebulous 12/26/2023 11:09 PM

Hey, I'll just give my thoughts and recommendations. :)

Spawn room: In general make it a little bit more spacious and appealing. Have at least one tile of space between the spawn tiles. Try to use less stoppers. It will improve flow and reliability. For weapons: No need to have a whole arsenal laying around. It just looks cramped. One or two should be enough. - Try to get more value out of them. Having a weapon for one part and then taking it away does not seem optimal.

  • Same for shields, they can have one tile space between them and still cover everything. Don't make parts too repetitive. Part between time checkpoint 4-5 and the part after time checkpoint 6. Using bullets is pretty DDmax/Oldschool and if not used properly ends up creating a not so enjoyable slow part. For novice I would have more space in general for bigger groups of tees.
z_eighty 12/26/2023 11:49 PM

thx, I didn't understand the last part

z_eighty 12/26/2023 11:49 PM
catseyenebulous 12/27/2023 12:02 AM

More space for bigger groups.

z_eighty 12/27/2023 12:04 AM

aaaaah, ok

z_eighty 12/27/2023 6:53 PM

Could someone talk about my map? If it's good, can it be accepted or not?

catseyenebulous 12/27/2023 7:27 PM

You should change the things I mentioned and re-upload it. I don't think it will be accepted the way it is now. :)

sqart. 12/28/2023 3:19 PM

u sigma man?)

z_eighty 12/30/2023 2:25 AM

...

catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 3:01 AM

Look at other testing channels and see how they handle it.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:29 AM

What would corks be?

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:29 AM
catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 3:39 AM

Corks? ๐Ÿค”

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:40 AM
z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:40 AM

Now about the spawn space, is that ok?

catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 3:42 AM

Looks better but space the spawn tiles out a bit.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:42 AM

what do you mean by spacing?

catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 3:46 AM
z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:54 AM

aah ok

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:55 AM
z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:55 AM

Hรก mais alguma coisa que preciso consertar?

z_eighty 12/30/2023 3:55 AM

Is there anything else I need to fix?


catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 4:01 AM

My other points probably.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:03 AM

Could you show me the repetitive parts please?

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:05 AM

pls?

catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 4:06 AM
catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 4:06 AM
catseyenebulous 12/30/2023 4:07 AM

I'd say these two. Also I would make the map a lot bigger.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:07 AM

ok

DDNet 12/30/2023 4:21 AM

Map filename must match channel name.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:22 AM

.-.

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:22 AM

see if I'm good

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:28 AM
z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:28 AM

๐Ÿ˜„

z_eighty 12/30/2023 4:48 AM

see if I'm good

catseyenebulous 01/01/2024 12:43 AM

Hmm, there is still a lot of things. Your map looks like ddmax and not modern ddrace. A lot of the parts are doable solo if not all. You should make the map 3x or 4x the size so we can rate more.

z_eighty 01/02/2024 1:31 PM

Well, people said the map looked like it was solo, so I made it to be solo....

z_eighty 01/02/2024 10:53 PM

.

z_eighty 01/03/2024 12:52 AM

๐Ÿ˜ญ

z_eighty 01/03/2024 12:52 AM

mapa iss solo

z_eighty 01/03/2024 4:38 PM

.

f0rtishka 01/03/2024 4:41 PM

,

pluskz 01/03/2024 4:42 PM

:

z_eighty 01/03/2024 4:53 PM

;-

z_eighty 01/05/2024 6:33 PM

.........

z_eighty 01/05/2024 6:33 PM

alguem responde ๐Ÿ˜ญ

cyberfighter 01/05/2024 8:12 PM

waiting for the decline

z_eighty 01/05/2024 8:16 PM

They could at least tell me to increase and I would do it just fine ๐Ÿ˜ญ

z_eighty 01/07/2024 8:35 PM

.-----------------------------------------------.

z_eighty 01/07/2024 8:35 PM

alguien????????????????????????????

z_eighty 01/07/2024 8:35 PM

pls??????????????????????

z_eighty 01/07/2024 8:36 PM
f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:29 PM

conners (i'm not going to screenshot every, basically whole map is inconsistent with them)

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:30 PM

you don't have to put 6, 2, 5 etc. rockets

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:30 PM

also using rocket for just 1 shot is oldschoolish

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:31 PM
f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:34 PM

teleport gun isn't working and is unnecessary in this part

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:35 PM

laser is used for 1 shot (and part can be completed without it)

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:36 PM

drag can be skipped solo with one shotgun shot (otherwise there's no use for shotgun lol)

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:37 PM

don't have to put time cp's in 2 rows

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:39 PM

2 grass main's in the map files even tho there's none on the map

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:39 PM

map is short and the design is unfinished

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 4:42 PM

take your time and fix the problems i listed

f0rtishka 01/08/2024 6:03 PM
@texnonik
z_eighty 01/09/2024 6:36 PM

how to delete the project? I already gave up ๐Ÿ˜ญ

texnonik 01/09/2024 7:57 PM

say to tester to decline the map

z_eighty 01/09/2024 7:58 PM
@coke1465

I want to decline the map

coke1465 01/09/2024 8:22 PM

okay

coke1465 01/09/2024 8:22 PM

$decline

carinhadaskina 01/11/2024 1:14 AM

F

coke1465 01/13/2024 6:45 PM

$archive_imm

DDNet 01/13/2024 6:45 PM

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