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this is low effort mapping, creating a short map doesn't mean 10min mapping

structure in random depending where you are (for the teleport, freeze and even unhook with this random hole. the speeder are useless

the map was really created to be short, I wanted to make a map for beginners to know how to be a rocket, so there is almost no failure, if you don't refuse before I can make it even bigger

part cheatable, then randomly having blue tele, (i shown the structure changing between teleport)

hmmm ok

y i see, but it looks mapped in 10 min, even a short map need time, here the flow is not fully smooth, the structure is not coherent

for now i'll put waiting but idk what to do with this map

$waiting

ok, I'll try to increase it and take some skips

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I added more parts

what?

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missing a block

useless because you can go right with enough speed

possible to skip still

possible to skip

also still a very little map and could be more smooth

but we hope to see you soon with a rework

ok, but could you explain this to me? I just can't find where this error is

are you saying it probably $decline?

Maybe I fixed the errors above

xddd

teles fixed

skip fixed

Could you give me an example of smooth?

ok, finally I REALLY got the jumps off

thought already that VeNa would do immeditly a decline but it looks like he is giving you a secon chance

finally... I suffer a lot in this world, Neymar and I 😭

I will look later in the map(maybe in ~18h) it's getting late in my country😴

first sry....,but still even with a decline you can send the map again

ok, but can I tell you what I should still do? to make the map smoother or more acceptable, etc.

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on this map, even if it is declined, I will try to change it later

this freeze is still not the same structure

the hook placed at the exact range where you can't hook if you are wall + part still cheatable

design/entities bug (not the only design bug in the map)

going in tele for the next part is meh

bad utilization of blockers, the part is kinda the same as the part cheatable + depending where you hook the swing is not rly smooth

the only kill tiles on the map, kinda weird + you can't even touch it cause of stoppers, bad utilization. + the part is not rly interesting + again going in tele for next part

again too much stoppers + part cheatable

tele 10 cheatable + not rly interesting the switch part can be done without rocket and just right left right left, is not interesting + again going in tele for the finish when you can put the finish

try to map with more space, take time to develop idea and parts, test it many time, and ask your friend to test it, try to not use too much entities when it's not needed.

$decline

half of that I already said, but okay