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some litle decor changes

Made nicer background Instead of a killing eye

First two parts repetetive

what?

ah yes

1) the map is way too tight 2) the parts have unbalanced difficulty. some parts are moderate (drag part) 3) there is a lot of repetitiveness going on. you have a good idea, but copy it multiple times 4) there is a lot of unfreeze missing

overall you have some good ideas combining different elements (no jump + jetpack, telehook, infinite jump etc). but that is not enough to make a releasable map, the map should have a overall quality. the design is clean, but maybe too basic. look at recent novice map releases, especially lavender forest, to see how bigger space can improve a map drastically. you could make a big map and place your ideas there in little parts, that would be a modern novice attempt.

try to play more maps to gain overall experience. that's important so you understand how to balance parts according to a set difficulty (novice x stars)

I hope you can take your ideas and my advice here to improve on your next maps

$decline

Thanks for advice

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