DDNet 11/04/2018 3:38 PM

"Greatness" by yo bitch

DDNet 11/04/2018 3:38 PM
texnonik 11/04/2018 6:59 PM

Big map

Yoc 11/05/2018 8:29 AM

nice map

jao 11/16/2018 4:09 PM

visible improvement to your last map (if I remember correctly), but needs some serious polishing. you should work on having a better structure, more space between parts and more space in general. some parts have cool ideas, others look like random stuff you quickly added to fill space. some parts are repetitive but that's a minor issue for now. also, some parts don't really work well. before submitting a map here, you should make sure that everything works flawless, try to have parts as best as they can be. I think it makes more sense to build a new map rather than trying to fix this one. (adding more space basically every will kinda go wrong)

jao 11/16/2018 4:10 PM

stuff like this is purely annoying and unnecessary

jao 11/16/2018 4:11 PM

this is somewhat messy and it doesn't work well

jao 11/16/2018 4:12 PM

this is a cool idea but not well implemented, doesn't really play smoothly

jao 11/16/2018 4:13 PM

this throw is used multiple times

jao 11/16/2018 4:14 PM

this gores filler is really random. even if it's a filler, you can make it fit the map.

jao 11/16/2018 4:14 PM

background shouldn't be hd

jao 11/16/2018 4:15 PM

these are just examples

jao 11/16/2018 4:15 PM

the best advice I can give is to look at already released maps to see what makes up a good map

jao 11/16/2018 4:15 PM

and too fix the space problem, rather have too much space than not enough

jao 11/16/2018 4:16 PM

reducing space in the end is always easy, adding more space is hard 😛

jao 11/16/2018 4:16 PM


jao 11/16/2018 4:16 PM

please ask if you have any questions

jao 11/16/2018 4:18 PM

also another advice, make sure that you really have fun playing your parts, without super

yo_bitch 01/26/2019 9:51 AM
Kicker 01/26/2019 4:03 PM

you almost didnt change anything at all, with these changes it still unreleasable map, making everything tight is bad way to make parts more harder or failer, some drag parts is cool idea, but rest is just annoying to do, part difficult jumping very high from part to part, fillers also very bad, you can look at "Exhale" map for understand what is good fillers parts, and as jao said make sure that you really have fun playing your parts without super

Kicker 01/26/2019 4:05 PM

i think map is unfixable because u fucked up on structure

jao 01/26/2019 4:08 PM

ye I don't really see improvements either

jao 01/26/2019 4:08 PM

"...needs some serious polishing. you should work on having a better structure, more space between parts and more space in general."

jao 01/26/2019 4:09 PM

trying yourself on a new map and making it good based on the given feedback is easier than trying to fix a bad map

Gwendal 01/26/2019 4:10 PM

yeah i think u shouldn't try to fix this one

jao 01/26/2019 4:10 PM

so, better start a new one

Gwendal 01/26/2019 4:10 PM

just keep the parts u prefer and start a new one with thoses

Jesus Christ 01/26/2019 4:13 PM


Jesus Christ 01/26/2019 4:13 PM


Syltoox 01/26/2019 5:36 PM

there is a put with a bug